Date: 03/15/2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sometimes stories like this can make the crew sound like they're all in kindergarten. But yours didn't, yours made it sound like there's a couple (Jim and Spock) they desperately want to see together and they're trying any way they can to make it happen. Wouldn't mind seeing that green hat show up on my head this year! You did a great job with the story, thanks so much!