Date: 11/12/2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a lovely, sad slice of the story here. Can we please have some happy times now? I would *love* to read about that week they spent on Vulcan for their bonding ceremony. Puh-leeeeeeese? :D *is not above begging when teased with such a lovely plot bunny*
Date: 03/21/2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was exquisite. There did seem to be a descrepancy between three and four. You put this to words beautifully, you truly captured Jim's pain and Spock's confusion. When Spock finally says "t'hy'la" my heart leapt in joy. "Will you help me remember?" Oh, poor Spock. Poor precious thing. What a wonderful story. Thank you.
You're very welcome. Yes, I really felt there was a missing piece between III, when Spock seems so totally wiped, and IV, where he and Jim once again seem to have that relationship that defies all boundaries.
Date: 03/20/2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
You are a writing wonder. Where do you get the ideas and most importantly- the time? But I am glad that you do. Hugs.
The ideas come from a variety of sources: a lifetime of loving Trek, things I see here that spark a "Now wait a minute" moment, and the occasional challenge. As for time, I'm single, childless, and permanently off the market, so I have lots of time, lol.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 03/20/2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love these continuations that you write. They pull the movies together and make the relationship between Kirk and Spock so much more solid and "there". Not just hinted at. Warm fuzzies for everyone.
TY. Yeah, I like to fill in the blanks if I can.
Date: 03/20/2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ah such a sweet story....and damn it we all saw it...the looks they gave each other at the end of trek III...Jim's huge smile....and then trek IV when Jim looks up in the sky on top of the mountain and sees Spock..you can't tell me that ain't romantic.....thanks for a lovely story....
Yeah, it's all there, whether the "canon" writers realized it or not.
Date: 03/20/2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
As always, you have made me very happy. This is a wonderful piece with great characterisation of Kirk and Spock and their love. Thank you.
I'm glad you're very happy; it makes me very happy in turn.
Date: 03/20/2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice, except Kirk was an Admiral at this point, yet Spock is calling him Captain here. In STIV he does call him Admiral.
True, but Spock's brain is pretty freaking scrambled right now, and he proabably called Jim Captain for years longer than he called him Admiral. However, point noted and appreciated.