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Reviewer: LdyJulanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2021 11:52 PM Title: epilogue

I absolutely fucking love this FANFIC truly. It is going in my favorites and I will probably read it more I have so marathon this Fic over the last couple days. It had everything action adventure drama the feelings I am I have said this before on many reviews. I am not usually a very big fan of alternate universe Fanfiction's I am not usually very big on Fanfiction's that deviate extremely extremely away from Canon mainly because it's been my experience that they get so ridiculous I can't see them fitting in the world it also makes it harder for me to follow them however for an alternate universe fic this is one of the best non-canon works I have ever read for any fandom where the characters are used in a different way you made everything different but yet you still The essence of who the characters are there personalities believable you didn't have An Kirk overly feminine or a ridiculously naïve Spock or other things where people have turned one or more the characters into overly thin feminine dramatic drama queens or whatever you manage to keep the character personalities OnPoint no pun intended and still make your own story and not only that but your story the EPA's Spock being in it did of Starfleet at first when I first read it I can close the be like no don't know about this but something told me to stick with it and I did and it was very awesome I love the whole concept I truly truly hate to see this universe this fic come to an end because I could actually read is equal where they go on some other type of mission or something the chemistry between the characters that you've created a lot of them being your own characters original characters is awesome and yet you managed to do it without making them Mary Sue's which is awesome I love your original characters which is also something that very rare for me usually I can't stand original characters very often but you have a talent in the way you did yours it was a great joy to read this FANFIC I'm not gonna lie there were parts where I was actually talking back to the computer screen whenever Kirk and Spock were injured especially when they had to separate. I could actually feel my heart beating faster as I was reading when Kirk and Spock pulled off that incredible save for Sulu. I come across this Fanfiction in my perusal of all completed work so I haven't had a chance to see if you have any other works I want to congratulate you for creating such a wonderful Fanfiction and for making it a length which is also enjoyable to read I personally am not one of this people who likes to read a whole lot of one shots in fact I won't even bother to open a FANFIC even if it says it's finished if it's under a thousand words because to me that's just can get me started on idea and I'm going to be very disappointed when it ends. I know it is been sometime since you wrote the story and I know that this archive has a little bit of age to it so I do not know if you will see this review if you do like I said thank you for an absolutely entertaining read I feel like this could actually be a published side novel of some sort course you know they don't actually fully acknowledge the concept of T'hy'la I wish they would because it's not the 1960s anymore but they don't so that's highly unlikely. I also want to mention that I fully enjoyed the character of Lieut. Ho Ash although I don't or rather did not enjoy the fact that she got injured I found it incredibly entertaining that you found a way to allow her character to continue as a significant part of the story even though she was disabled and not able to continue her original position the fact that you made it clear that she could still be a tactical officer and be wheelchair can find was very entertaining to me also as I am personally wheelchair I thought the whole concept was very enjoyable I like that you use the concept of Vulcan strength to be able to make her be a part of saving the situation thank you for wonderful Fanfiction :-)-ldyjulanna

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2020 2:57 PM Title: chapter 7.2

I don't remember when I first read this, but I know it was several years ago now.  Periodically, I've come back to read the story again and again.  One reason I love it is that I love your portrayal of Spock as a real kick-ass who is really using all of his skills and knowledge to the best of his abilities.  He is such a good example to people around him.  Yet little by little it becomes obvious that the cost of behaving like that is beginning to wear on him.  He is injured and begins to heal more slowly, He reacts to the medications.  And then finally we get to this chapter.  Spock has put himself on the line for EPAS and the Federation too many times and he did not fully recover on the Vulcan ship.  He is vulnerable and finally overwhelmed by what he is trying to do, but he doesn't quit even when facing death.  Then out of the blue, Sarek of all people rescues him - finally!  I just love that.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: DDM Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2017 7:41 PM Title: prologue

Look at me, 6 years late to the party! But I just couldn't help myself. You write a mean plot. Exquisite, really. The build up with the two of them is perfect, no imature angst, just a slow and graceful journey. Loved it. All of it. 

I have one thing only to complain about. You can't see Alpha Centauri from San Francisco. 

Reviewer: ShayAlyce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2015 1:58 AM Title: prologue

It took me a week to read this absolutely amazing piece of art. For me, that is phenomenal. I can guarantee that I'll be rereading it, too. It's well written, geniusly plotted, and breathtakingly full of action and adventure. I adore it and will be recommending it to anyone who asks (and even those who don't).

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2014 10:41 AM Title: chapter 4.1

Very stressful.

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2014 10:51 AM Title: chapter 3.7

(that was a heck of a first kiss)
Well, this final approval that the girl had ver ears in love with Spock .. but where the hell is Jim running?

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2014 4:28 AM Title: chapter 3.6

I can not believe it: It gets worse!?

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2014 8:20 AM Title: chapter 3.5

shity situation inded.

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2014 7:19 AM Title: chapter 3.1

It was a very loaded period. I liked what little Chekhov said.

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2014 9:57 AM Title: chapter 1.4

This story was an escape from workload.

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2014 4:47 AM Title: chapter 1.2

Strange. I'm not sure I understood in what universe I'm in, or what the nature of the story. I'll wait to find out.

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2014 11:01 AM Title: prologue

I just now reemerge from several days of being stuck in your AU and I am almost sorry this amazing tale is finished. The many other reviewers have probably already said all there is to say, but I really, really want to join into the chorus: this is a beautifully conceived and perfectly executed story, epic, touching in a deep and good way.

What I find absolutely awesome is how you show that messed up lives can lead people to being heroic and selfless, a gift for others even while struggeling to accept themselves and their past. And I love the way you stress that fear is never absent and always has to be overcome again and again.

I will certainly go back to read bits and pieces again and this is not the way I feel about many K/S fics. I rate it ten, but could easily give it 100.

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 7:16 PM Title: chapter 3.5

The girls in party clothes on a mission. Love it.

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 7:13 PM Title: chapter 3.4

I just have to say. This would have made a better storyline in the 2009 movie. Just sayin.

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 7:11 PM Title: chapter 3.3

Oh Spock Prime you devil.

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 5:42 PM Title: chapter 1.2

OH Jim. Making a wonderful impression.

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 5:38 PM Title: chapter 1.1

Oh Spock. This is good.

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 5:35 PM Title: prologue

Wow. Just wow. I don't know how I missed this story.

Reviewer: foxyk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2013 3:40 AM Title: epilogue

I love this story, you deserve to be actually published way more than 50 shades of suck.  But seriously, I've barely slept in two days!


Your OCs are seamless with the Trek cast, the story was good, and I give it a 10/10!

Reviewer: mila Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2013 11:00 PM Title: prologue

Oh and one more thing...and this is critical - where can I get my hands on more of your strories?

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