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Reviewer: Jules Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the story. I didn't noticed the spelling mistakes. I just loved the way that Spock took over the situation and threw Kirk against the wall, and had his wicked way with Kirk. So hot.

Jules

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice piece, but you want "whet" instead of "wet" his appetite and "planes" instead of "plains" of flesh. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks... I didn't even know 'whet' was a word...

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