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Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 10:49 AM Title: A Kick to the Edge of the Board

So I've read the first three chapters of this story and I'm very intrigued.  It's going quite well.  Jim is not the ignorant idiot Uhura wants to make him out to be, nor the drivelling slut Finnegan wants to portray him as.  It seems only Spock gets Jim.  By this point I'm sure even if the chess club folded Spock would find a way to be with Jim.  I predict possible trouble, though.  Jim's got a reputation to live down.  Poor thing.  I'm favoriting this one so I can follow along.  Great job!

Reviewer: AuroraMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 7:10 AM Title: A Kick to the Edge of the Board

okay, now I want to kick Uhura's ass. maybe you should put her in a position where she learns that everything she ever heard about him isn't true at all, and have it be a situation where she really regrets her choice of words to him. throw in a little bit of humiliation for her too.

pretty please? :)

Reviewer: Tonati Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 6:44 AM Title: A Kick to the Edge of the Board

I am enjoying your story tremendously. Please keep up such a good work!

 

Reviewer: skepticallady Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2011 12:30 PM Title: A Pawn from Chris to Spock

Good story.  Let the games begin between Uhura and Kirk to get Spock.  But I can already tell he likes Jim.  Uhura will just embarrass her self yet again.  Love the story.  Update soon!!

Reviewer: Vulcan Pearl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2011 7:40 AM Title: A Pawn from Chris to Spock

This looks like a good start to another  sweet AU/early meeting story by you.

Hope to see more soon!

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