Date: 05/27/2011 5:47 PM Title: Gary in Check
I am so glad you did whiz through this, I read the last chapter and nearly had a panic attack. Vulcan destroyed, Jim, Pascha and Annette in danger from that maniac Gary, now all I want is a breather, a cup of tea and somewhere dark to let my emotions catch up on this rollercoaster you wrote. WOW.
Date: 05/27/2011 4:25 PM Title: The Squeeze
Oh man I can see it coming, Pike and Jim save their ladies from Gary. Jump on board the Enterprise and Number One won't be left behind. They save earth and in the middle Annette goes into labor!
This is gonna be a nailbiter
P.S. Nicely Done
Date: 05/27/2011 2:24 PM Title: The Squeeze
Wow! You still destroyed Vulcan. I didn't see it coming like that.
I'm glad Jim isn't in trouble for messing with the test. Komack is a dick. Still.
I thought that girl was coming in to tell them that Gary and Ben hurt Annette Jim and Pascha.
Date: 05/25/2011 4:47 PM Title: A Real Queen Piece
Okay, Pascha continues to be a bundle of energy, and now we find out why! I feel like I fail at Star Trek, I don't know what a Napean is. I'll rectify that as soon as possible. But if she's out with Gaila all night, she's grown according to Terran standards, and that's what Spock judges himself by, so he has no room to be angry. But then again, after the stunt she pulls at the end of the chapter.... Hmm. Finnegan earned that, unforntunately. I'm not entirely sorry. But now there's going to be some old-fashioned payback. Girl had better watch her back. Well, if you get another chapter up I'll be thrilled, but I won't beg for it. I'm just thankful for every chapter you put out here. Thanks again.
I think Napeans are mentioned like once in the whole franchise. I just picked them because they have empathic abilities that were really vaguely described so I could make them how I wanted. XD Glad you liked it, and I would never make people beg. I beg myself to stop sometimes, but that's besides the point. XD Thanks for staying with me. :D
Date: 05/25/2011 1:43 AM Title: A Strong Defense
Wow, it's a good thing they've got Pascha who gets Monty to put an awesome security system in at Spock's. Scotty can do anything mechanical. And later he gets to hook up with Uhura! Are there any sparks there? Hmm. It kind of made me sad when you wrote that Gaila is lonely. Someone so bubbly and happy and perky doesn't seem like she'd have trouble with that. Kind of makes her more alive to me. Great detail. Everyone's getting along with everyone, and getting to share with each other. I'm sure that will help in the end. Thanks so much for a great bonus chapter. You're doing wonderful!
Date: 05/25/2011 1:35 AM Title: Clearance (Make Room for the Lovebirds)
Okay, I'm a chapter behind, so I'm just going to stop long enough to say great chapter and I look forward to the next! Had to give you a good rating because I love the story. On to the next chapter!
Date: 05/24/2011 8:19 PM Title: Clearance (Make Room for the Lovebirds)
OFIJIOGJ. Nice segue between Jim and Sulu's conversation and Jim and McCoy's. I love that. xD
ALSO, YEAH BONES/CHAPEL. FTW. <3
Also, haha, Bones has to stay in the room that Jim and Spock just... aaaahaha. Hahaha. He doesn't want to know, lol.
Date: 05/24/2011 1:34 AM Title: Spock, the Knight
Ooh, nice ending, nice ending. And I won't lie, I wasn't expecting there to be gang activitiy, but it is a pleasant surprise. Very dramatic. :D
And, as always, love the interaction between Kirk and Spock. SO LOVING. SO CUTE. <3
Date: 05/24/2011 1:34 AM Title: Spock, the Knight
Jim's freaking out, and it's reminding Pascha of ... whom? What's got her so upset that Jim's upset? And I should have known Pascha's client would be Montgomery Scott. So he's managed to transport the beagle into thin air. Poor baby. Scotty, not the dog. Pascha should be able to get him out of that problem. And we're back to Jim and Spock. Jim's terrified this gang is going to get him and possibly Spock in the process. Okay, they can handle that. You've got to be pretty amazing to be able to pull one over on Spock. Hopefully Spock will calm Jim down and they'll handle anything that happens together. Good chapter. Hope your week goes well.
Date: 05/23/2011 3:46 PM Title: I Suspect I'm a Poisoned Pawn
TRISHAAAAAAA! I made an account so I could finally review your lovely, lovely stories.
Firstly, I have to tell you that when I first read the title for this, I was like, "Poisoned Prawn? What?"
Also, sad Kirk makes me sad. ;__;
HE'D BETTER BE HAPPY BY NEXT CHAPTER, DAMMIT.
SPEAKING OF WHICH, YOU'D BETTER UPDATE SOON, DAMMIT! :P
(I joke, of course. Well, sort of. :3)
Anyways, AWESOME CHAPTER. LOVED IT. NOT THAT THAT'S SURPRISING OR ANYTHING. <3
A poisoned pawn is a pawn that's in a position that could ruin the game for the player. Meaning Jim thinks he's going to ruin stuff. Also, YAYYYYYY YOU MADE AN ACCOUNT. I am working. Working hard. And being distracted by First Contact.