Date: 05/22/2011 5:07 PM Title: I Suspect I'm a Poisoned Pawn
Gaila's clock is ticking. Maybe she'll hook up with Pascha. I can't remember if Bones is in a relationship. He could be with Pascha. They are about the same age I think.
Uhura needs to chill out. Jim needs to get some confidence and stop being afraid.
Date: 05/22/2011 2:02 PM Title: I Suspect I'm a Poisoned Pawn
Okay. Jim's upset about whatever Pike talked to him about, and it has to do with his time with Gary Mitchell. That's honestly all I got out of this chapter. Pascha's cute, she can try to cheer him up and he can't lie to her about how he feels. Uhura still automatically thinks the worst of Jim even after finding out how much he loves Spock. I hope Jim can get over this overwhelming fear he has that his past is going to come back to haunt him. Spock knows, and Spock isn't going anywhere. That should be all that matters. Good chapter.
Date: 05/21/2011 4:08 PM Title: Pike in a Bind
Pascha is a force of nature, and it's almost hard to believe she's related to Spock. Except for the warmth. Spock's a good guy, just quiet. I think it's awesome that Jim and Spock have her staying with them. She's going to be fun to have around. Pike on the other hand; he's got his hands full with this investigation. Jim is not being a cooperative witness, and can you blame him? It was part of the darkest time in his life. I wouldn't want to go sharing that with just anyone either. Maybe Spock should help him if Pike really needs him. But Jim did say to leave Spock out of it. Who knows? You're doing a great job with this story, I'm on edge!
Date: 05/21/2011 2:30 AM Title: Challenge Averted
lol very cute^^ I like the cousin, I'm curious as t o what her role is going to be between these two...looking forward to more^^
Date: 05/21/2011 2:25 AM Title: Challenge Averted
Okay, Pascha? Adorable! What a bundle of energy! And empathic. That's got to come in handy. She definitely takes to Jim and supports the two of them being together. Amanda doesn't seem to make much fuss over it either. It's good that Spock has family around to visit with. And Nogura and Pike seem to be on a mission to find out all the dirt with Mitchell so they can put him away for good. While I don't think Jim wants his past messed with that much, I'm sure he'll be happy when Gary gets what's coming to him. You're doing a great job with the story, I can't wait for more!
Date: 05/21/2011 2:10 AM Title: Challenge Averted
Hurray! I guessed the cousin part. That's cool that Amanda is there to meet Jim.
So, Sarek is pants at matchmaking. Stonn and Pascha, Spock and T'Pring. At least it all seems to have worked itself out. Maybe Pascha will find some energetic being at the academy to date.
The story with pike and Nogura busting Gary is heating up nicely. I feel like it might be about to boil over.
Date: 05/20/2011 2:58 PM Title: A Challenger Appears
Okay, so Jim and Spock are adorable all over the place (and how gross is it that they're that sugary sweet??) and Jim's feeling better. Leonard seems to have found a companion, which is good because I don't want the good doctor lonely. Jim goes to class and we meet Hikaru and Pavel (who are a couple and every story I read has them as a couple, isn't that cool?) And then Spock asks Jim to move in (d'aww) and WAIT! Who is this mysterious female throwing herself at Spock? Jim will not stand for that! I'm sure it's a relative or something. Hope Jim doesn't do anything embarrassing. Great chapter!! Oh, and don't worry about the Pokemon reference. My best friend plays Pokemon and we're all middle-aged adults!
Date: 05/20/2011 2:49 PM Title: Announced Mate
Good chapter! Jim and Spock are happy together, and the admirals aren't going to get them in trouble, although they had to hear about Gary. Poor Jim, having to relive that so often. Spock's gonna get him home and he'll be okay. Oh, and thanks for explaining the chapter title. I know NOTHING about chess so I would have been lost. Thank you! On to the next chapter....
Date: 05/20/2011 9:47 AM Title: A Challenger Appears
Nice job with all the love. Jim/Spock. Bones/Christine. Sulu/Pavie. Nogura / Pike - just kidding there.
I liked Spock asking Jim to move in.
Are the ladies Amanda's relation? Perhaps Spock's aunt and cousin? Jealous Jim is cute. I hope this is that innocent.
Date: 05/19/2011 11:02 PM Title: Announced Mate
It's ok I like shamless fluff, it makes the world go around^^ specially Spock and Jim's fluff^^
Date: 05/19/2011 9:53 AM Title: Announced Mate
I'm glad Nogura is warming up to Spock a little. Spock is too good not to like.
Poor Spock thought Jim would not want him because he's half human. Silly boy. Are there any more dark secrets between these two?