Date: 06/04/2011 6:38 PM Title: The Wisdom of Cookies (Part 1)
Wonderful..absolutely brilliant..you words glide so easily across my screen....For someone who doesn't know much about San Francisco...you are making me a believer ......can't wait for the next chapter...
I'm glad I've managed to paint a convincing picture! I've never been to San Fransico, or any part of California, but I'd love to go some day, if only to see Golden Gate Park. Thanks for your review!
Date: 05/31/2011 8:42 PM Title: I Like Him, I Like Him Not
This just grabbed me from the start..way to go...You write very well..Yes, the baby thing was sad. But life isn't always a bowl of cherries...Looking forward to more....
Hopefully what follows in the next couple chapters will continue to intrigue you. I still can't believe I wrote about someone killing a baby. Even if it wasn't real, even in the story, it's still a little depressing.
Thank you for your review!