Date: 06/09/2011 12:15 PM Title: Anchor Me
Oh this was wonderful! It's such a treat to come across a lovely, long one-shot like this. To make it even better you have a really inclusive writing style that makes for a great reading experience.
You effortlessly pulled me into each scene, and the story progressed at a natural pace that never seemed forced. Even better, the dialogue flowed naturally and your characterisations were ...
Are you starting to get the idea that I liked the story?
McCoy was a particular treat, but he has always been a favourite of mine. The part where he's trying not to smile while he's kicking Kirk out of sickbay was a gem.
S'lovey ... s'wonderful ... s'marvellous ...
And now I'm off to see if you've written anything else!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review made my day.