Date: 09/10/2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
lovely sensory images, rich and vibrant. only thing that threw me was the way Spock Prime's death went unremarked it seemed, until young Spock said something about it. did I miss a spot? (wouldn't be the first time o.O)
other'n that it was one hell of a good read. trippy how Jim's dream both came true, and didn't... :)
Date: 09/10/2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
OOOOOHHHHH!! This was beyond excellent. This was so freaking good. I loved this story. Your writing method was a little difficult to get a hold of at first but once I figured it out I was in for the ride I've always wanted. I'm shivering here. This chapter just blew my mind. It's all about how you perceive what you're being shown. It started with a dream. It ended with a promise. Way to go! Thank you so much. I hope to see more from you soon.