Date: 04/27/2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just watched the fifth movie for the first time and (naturally) had to come read this. Funny how there's not much that needs to be changed for this one to be slashy. Love what you did including Bones here though. They're very much each other's family.
Date: 07/10/2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awww. I have to tell you, one line in your writing struck me as hilarious: the Klingons had been spanked and sent back to their hidey-holes (fucking awesome). I rolled when I read that, don't ask me why. But this story was so observant and brought back all the joy I had in watching ST V. Who didn't squee when Spock said "Worse, I betrayed you." Thank you so much for all the pieces you've written that show us the love that (could have been?) was there.
yeah, I liked that line too, along with McCoy's various grumbles; Bones is always good for a laugh. Glad you liked the piece.
Date: 07/10/2011 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, Retake of Favorite Parts! Now oc I'll have to watch it over again..
I like that you "corrected" the "lost a brother" phrase, as I remember Jim says he lost a brother but got him back--which speaks well for the T'h'yla relationship but not so well for Sam.
Incongruencies nibble at me.
But as I said--have to see it over.... :-)
Date: 07/10/2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
That scene where Sybok dies to save them is always so sad. I know if he'd survived, he probably would have landed a life in prison, but then there was something there on that planet, so maybe that would have counted for something! I'm just glad Spock has Jim there for him to help him recover from his loss.