Date: 07/14/2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Heh heh. I rather liked that...
I happen to know for a fact that Spock will always desire Jim, no matter how fat he gets - and it's nice to be the one reading about it for a change rather than slogging away writing it...
Date: 07/14/2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Jim was so busy thinking of his spare tire and the female he flirted with that he never considered the fact that Spock would be saddened that he had lost his rank as Admiral. Of course we know Jim would do anything to secure his husband's safety. They shall forever grow old together....in love.
Date: 07/14/2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh gracious, this was good. Hilarious, but good. I say hilarious because I can just hear Jim being all concerned about his appearance, and Spock thinking he's insane for it. That's the glory of love, I suppose. Jim is NOT a whale! But this was playful and it was exciting and I loved it. Thanks.
No, JIm's not a whale, but given the theme of this movie, I couldn't resist. Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 07/14/2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh god. i'm gonna have to schedule a visit to the dentist. damn, i'm getting tired of all these dental bills. ;)
anyway, i love how you portrayed their later love, the more mature love that many people skip over writing. i think you did it great justice, and i love how you didn't make Spock completely disregard the fact that Jim had gained some weight, but include the weight in what he loved about Jim.
Yeah, I know; it's enough to rot your teeth, lol. But it's worth it. Thanks for reading.
Date: 07/13/2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's wonderful the way you portrays the love between them, that mature love and visibly different to the youth.
I love how you samples the love between them, how you sample the human concern and how the love reflected through a Vulcan who always look beautiful to his bondmate.
It's simply beautiful.
Why, thank you. I have a feeling Spock will always find Jim beautiful.