Date: 09/14/2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great job again. You write soo well it makes me believe it is happening right in front of me. Again, you and Elfqueen55 make a great team. I hope we can work together sometime as well.
Thanks so much for your comment my friend. Are you ever going to finish your story?
Date: 07/31/2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
How amazing he now felt, the doubts he had, the sickening feeling of abandonment, all now a nightmare now in the past.....Great line.
I feel awful when I forget to thank my friends, when they read my work..thanks so much.
Date: 07/28/2011 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
It had not ended in disaster as he thought, but instead a promising beginning.
That's my fav line--that he went into this thinking how badly it would all end, but that it turned out well anyways :D
I was checking on one of my poems and never thanked you for your comment. Thank you, I appreciate it.