[Report This]Date: 01/21/2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
My oh my...I do believe I will swoon!
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved Spock being such a badass warrior. Especially when he made those losers piss themselves.
I'm afraid Charles is being set up in the worst way to take the fall for Jim's kidnapping. It's too bad Spock couldn't get better info during the meld.
Date: 01/20/2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, Spock is furious! To actually think he would reverse to the Pre-reform Vulcan warriors' instincts! This chapter was really fantastic. But I wonder about the consequences of their completing bond... Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Date: 01/13/2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Diane Lane...but just guessing at Under a Tuscan Sun or The Perfect Storm?
Back to the grindstone, ;) you have me stuck to the screen!
[Report This]Date: 01/12/2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
I like Charles. I hope he's able to recall everything that's happening to him later.
Jim is very cool when he's escaping and fighting.
[Report This]Date: 12/29/2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Will Jim eventually get pregnant? Curious. :-)
Author's Response:
Date: 12/26/2011 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Impressive. I lie how Jim insulted them in Klingon. He is very strong to control his anger like he does, and I'm sure that his link to Spock will help him to fight againt torture and Tarsus IV. Thank you for that chapter, I can't wait for the next.
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great drama. I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 11/23/2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow. Not even out of the Academy, and an Admiral already hate him and try to mess with him. I can't wait to see how he will faire against a furious Vulcan protecting his bondmate.
Thanks for that chapter.
Author's Response:
Date: 11/23/2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully written.
Keep up the great work.
Please update soon.
SM
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
Diane Lane. Must love dogs.
I can't believe Jim was taken like that. I hope Spock is able to keep the bond with Jim. I also hope that admiral is strung up for what he's doing.
Author's Response:
You got the actress right, 5 gold stars; but the movie wrong, no cookies (wrong year, wrong critter).
[Report This]Date: 10/26/2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
It was nice to see areel shaw being decent to Jim. I'm glad she was able to help Bones.
I liked pikes reaction when he found out about the bond. And it's so refreshing to see Winona being lovely and pleasant.
Date: 10/10/2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
The angst was well done :) I liked the imagery you used to describe the meld and the empathic bond. Take that, gold-digger!T'Pring.
Date: 10/10/2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
I like all of it very much--but I love the visualization bits!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
You did well Rubyhair. A wonderful meld of angst and love. Not everyone can get that combination right. Well done.
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
The angst stuff is good. It's good to put that in to balance the fluff. I loved seeing their bonding. Very lovely.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Heck yeah! You've got to give us their destiny now.
I love seeing Jim all wound up. I'm glad Winona was able to help him. Spock's the man for finally pinning Jim down.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
I adored the Kissing finger tips greeting between Jim and Winona. It's very sweet.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice job. I'm glad to meet Bones and see them as roommates.