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Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's interesting to see Jim with extra powers. I can't wait to see what they all are.

I'm also glad Jim still has a good relationship with his mother.

Reviewer: AuroraMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

loving the chapters so far. ^_^
I know the empathy between the two is going to make for some hot sex. hehehe.

Reviewer: egwolf65 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 6


Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Yeah, about time.

Reviewer: muggy44 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Im so happy to see Jim kicking Spocks ass . ok not kicking  at least holding his own and getting to give Spock some Licks back. I really Love your Spock Taking the Reins and Going after Jim Thats kind of New. Love Spock all GERRRRRRRRRRR. After jim. Can't wait for more. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Reviewer: kalajms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love this story! I like the different take on Kirk...can't wait for the sexy times :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Kirk is indeed very different here, so is my Spock. Don't be too disappointed with the initial sex descriptions. More explicit stuff will come later.

Reviewer: foom101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

only AWESOME!! more more more! i loved how spock made his move!! YUMMY! ;P

Author's Response: Thanks! Very unusual for Spock, but as my Jim is different, so is my Spock.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, a primative dance, almost like raptors, falcons and hawks and such. Display, ie peacocking, impression. and then the new mates begin wooing. In this case I'd say display done, mate won, mating to begin, and nesting soon!

I just hope Nyota is understanding since she knows that Jim's part alien and can only be intimate with someone whom he is telepathically and emotionally bonded to.

Well done

Author's Response: Very observant, Nyota will understand. Thanks for such a great review!

Reviewer: muggy44 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

This so amazing . I love this story it has so many new and fun things  But still are boys. Just love Jim's strength's with his Power and his mind. Spock seem so sweet too. more wanting to be intouch with his inner self . I have a Q & A for you is Jim going to be as Strong as Spock or what. I like that he can take them on and hold his own. But Spock thats fun. I hope. well I really love this story and am so looking forward to much more. PLEASE. XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Author's Response: Can that be my surprise? What I will say is that they do rely on each other very much, but they always do! I'd say more than you're average story. I am really happy that you like the story so much. Very cool stuff will ensue! Promise!

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

Spock likes you Jim, a child culd see it.

Author's Response: He can be a little dense! But then again he's a male! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2011 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

This is a great story! And I love the language bits!

Reviewer: phamtonsnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

Good story

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2011 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Spock finds out about Taraus early this time and he is intreaged by Jim.  Can't wait for more.

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Reviewer: Banner Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like this. You've taken canon and given it a neat twist. I'm looking forward to a very long story...

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Reviewer: Wild Melody Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

These two chapters start off as a fantastic read.  I can't wait for more. Love that Uhura and Jim might be friends in this one.  Makes a nice change and Winona is nice, which also makes a change. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. Jim and Uhura will be friends but for a while they will compete for Spocks attention, like in Ch 3. But they'll work it out once she figures it out. She isn't vindictive, only a typical human female.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2011 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

I just inhaled the first 3 chapters--great! I like the new xeno slant--and I love the eye-color thing--it resolves the hazel/blue timeline differences! Lol

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I also thought the eye color thing would be really cool. I love the fact that Jim is an empath. He is also hiding some big time darkness.

Reviewer: samandra22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Fantastic! I love stories with empath!Kirk and your writing style is so enjoyable.

Author's Response: Glad you like the story and my writing style, wow! Thanks!!

Reviewer: muggy44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3


Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the great review. Chapter 4 is nearly done.

Reviewer: CMM Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looks promising.

Author's Response: Thank you! From you those two words are like gold pieces.

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