[Report This]Date: 10/04/2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
It's interesting to see Jim with extra powers. I can't wait to see what they all are.
I'm also glad Jim still has a good relationship with his mother.
Date: 09/30/2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
loving the chapters so far. ^_^
I know the empathy between the two is going to make for some hot sex. hehehe.
Date: 09/29/2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, about time.
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Im so happy to see Jim kicking Spocks ass . ok not kicking at least holding his own and getting to give Spock some Licks back. I really Love your Spock Taking the Reins and Going after Jim Thats kind of New. Love Spock all GERRRRRRRRRRR. After jim. Can't wait for more. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story! I like the different take on Kirk...can't wait for the sexy times :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Kirk is indeed very different here, so is my Spock. Don't be too disappointed with the initial sex descriptions. More explicit stuff will come later.
Date: 09/29/2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
only AWESOME!! more more more! i loved how spock made his move!! YUMMY! ;P
Author's Response: Thanks! Very unusual for Spock, but as my Jim is different, so is my Spock.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, a primative dance, almost like raptors, falcons and hawks and such. Display, ie peacocking, impression. and then the new mates begin wooing. In this case I'd say display done, mate won, mating to begin, and nesting soon!
I just hope Nyota is understanding since she knows that Jim's part alien and can only be intimate with someone whom he is telepathically and emotionally bonded to.
Well done
Author's Response: Very observant, Nyota will understand. Thanks for such a great review!
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
This so amazing . I love this story it has so many new and fun things But still are boys. Just love Jim's strength's with his Power and his mind. Spock seem so sweet too. more wanting to be intouch with his inner self . I have a Q & A for you is Jim going to be as Strong as Spock or what. I like that he can take them on and hold his own. But Spock thats fun. I hope. well I really love this story and am so looking forward to much more. PLEASE. XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Can that be my surprise? What I will say is that they do rely on each other very much, but they always do! I'd say more than you're average story. I am really happy that you like the story so much. Very cool stuff will ensue! Promise!
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
Spock likes you Jim, a child culd see it.
Author's Response: He can be a little dense! But then again he's a male! Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/11/2011 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is a great story! And I love the language bits!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2011 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Spock finds out about Taraus early this time and he is intreaged by Jim. Can't wait for more.
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Date: 08/14/2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like this. You've taken canon and given it a neat twist. I'm looking forward to a very long story...
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[Report This]Date: 08/12/2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
These two chapters start off as a fantastic read. I can't wait for more. Love that Uhura and Jim might be friends in this one. Makes a nice change and Winona is nice, which also makes a change. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. Jim and Uhura will be friends but for a while they will compete for Spocks attention, like in Ch 3. But they'll work it out once she figures it out. She isn't vindictive, only a typical human female.
Date: 08/12/2011 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
I just inhaled the first 3 chapters--great! I like the new xeno slant--and I love the eye-color thing--it resolves the hazel/blue timeline differences! Lol
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I also thought the eye color thing would be really cool. I love the fact that Jim is an empath. He is also hiding some big time darkness.
Date: 08/12/2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic! I love stories with empath!Kirk and your writing style is so enjoyable.
Author's Response: Glad you like the story and my writing style, wow! Thanks!!
Date: 08/12/2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
REALLY GREAT SO FAR . MORE PLEASE, XOXOXOXOX
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the great review. Chapter 4 is nearly done.
Date: 08/10/2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looks promising.
Author's Response: Thank you! From you those two words are like gold pieces.