Date: 08/21/2011 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting style.
For the first few lines I thought it was a conversation. Or rather, a conversation with bOth sides written. Once I'd figured it was just Kirk's side of the conversation, it was just brilliant.
The lack of Spock's responses increase the urgency of the piece.
Just awesome. (is that really only 100 words?) so if this new obsession you mention is going to have more fics like this, I'll vote yes!
Date: 08/21/2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh la la! Yep, you did good with this. ^_^ But you know what makes pon farr fics even hotter? *whispers* The Green Wrap.
(Seems like I inadvertently started something with that challenge, huh? So sorry, I hope you'll forgive me!)
ROTFLMAO. But I only had 100 words to work with; I couldn't use 20 of them getting Jim out of the tunic, lol.
Date: 08/21/2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I could follow this, sort of! It was definitely funny! And I'm sure no one would complain if you put Pon Farr in The Vulcan Who Fell to Earth. Though, I guess with a farm, Jim couldn't afford to be in bed for a few days in a row. Oh, well. Whatever happens.
Oh, I'm sure no one would complain, lol. We'll see if it works. I'm still not 100% sure what they're going to do (or when they're going to do it, snicker).