Date: 12/06/2013 6:31 PM Title: none
Oh wow, that was so ... so something, I don't know how to say it.
I just LOVE how he was considering that his categorization of his feelings might be flawed, since it's not his field of expertise.
I love how you left the ending hanging without making it uncertain. It will happen, it is certain.
I even love the rotund old scientist with the comfortable marriage! (Is he in any other stories?)
I don't use it often, but THIS is a 10 rating.
Date: 10/14/2009 4:45 AM Title: none
Absolutely delightful! Spock's inner monologue here is so much fun to read, him being uneasy with the lack of dignity during sex is hilarious. His devotion to Jim comes through clear and strong, just as I always feel it does in canon. Thanks for a great read!
Date: 07/19/2009 6:00 AM Title: none
Another wonderful rendition of the chemistry these two people share. Spock sure loves his experiments. It's true what you write after make believe sex with no partner you do feel so alone, it sucks. To have someone who truly loves you and understands you is sublime. May they have many more experiments together. Thank you for this...
Date: 06/20/2009 10:18 AM Title: none
What a treat, a Jenna story I'd not seen before. And a yummy one at that. Sorry whoever Max B i, but I love the repetition and emphasis, the rhythms of the words. Hee hee -- I too love the literary and articulate Spock -- but I think he goes on just exactly enough!
Yep, this's another good one, Jenna, love. ---Greywolf
Date: 06/14/2009 4:24 PM Title: none
Kirk's never been one to back away from a challenge, and boy did he have one here. So much at stake if Spock took offence, (or whatever the hell a Vulcan would call it) on the slim chance of change.
I love the way you write these two. I didn't at first think that Kirk was such an easy going character (given that he's a ships Captain) and this forced me to get out the Original ST eps and watch them again... you have him nailed alright. Whilst he is very dominant and even a little aggressive on the Bridge when he's off duty or on vacation he really is quite easy going, the liberties he allows McCoy spring to mind. Even indulging Spock when he can. I had not observed that before. ^^;
The dialogue is spot-on. Spock really does sound like cannon and I love the logic you can write, it rings true.
Thanks for a great read! =D
Date: 12/24/2005 7:42 PM Title: none
Spock’s ponderings showed great insight of a man unused to being touched, or sharing his privacy. I suggest when reading this you take the time to savor the story’s build up…it’s worth the feast.
Date: 12/22/2005 5:19 PM Title: none
Not bad, not bad at all. I especially liked the literate, articulate Spock - but and this is a big but - it's so damn long for what it's got to say. I realise it's all a matter of taste and style but don't you think you go over and over the same points in very similar phrases.