Date: 09/12/2011 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Do you realize you left Hypatia Kosh with a one word review...that is not an easy thing to do...This was beyond words...wonderful story with amazing imagery. Please write something else soon....no pressure though...THANKS...for sharing...
You are quite welcome--cheers for your kind words! I will do my best to write more soon. :) Thanks for your encouragement.
Date: 09/11/2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG OMG I loved this..it was a pleasure to read...you have poetry in your words....you make is so easy for the reader to follow...damn, I could even imagine the sheep as McCoy looking at Jim and the crunch, crunch of glass under Spock's boots...this was excellent...can't wait to see what will happen next...great job...
Thank you! And this is a sentence that would have given Roddenberry a heart attack: "I could even imagine the sheep as McCoy." :) Hee!