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Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2017 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

Beautifully imagined and expressed, this moment when two persons stop orbiting around each other and join to create something new, a new world,  a new universe.

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2011 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

Aw, I liked that. Your conversations are almost too intuitive for me to grasp (yes, aspie I am still) but I was just barely able to follow it and I quite enjoyed the sentiments expressed.

Author's Response:

Your comment re: the conversation is right on, I think. I do tend to be obscure, if only to avoid overstating things. I'll keep tinkering with this one.

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2011 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

You have the characterization down pat...looking forward to where you are going with it...great job..

Author's Response:

Thanks, Dahliaxat! We'll see where the boys wander off to...

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

And now I have to go to work and be curious all day.  Really very curious. Hope you're planning to update soon?

Author's Response:

Have updated now, Fugitive. Let me know if your curiousity is satisfied. :) I'm still not sure if this story is complete or not...

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really nice - it's so homely and familiar...  :)

Author's Response:

:) Awesome--I'm glad it feels like home. At their best, I think that's what the boys create for each other.

Reviewer: CORGIMOM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my, this is interesting. Can I come along for the ride?

Author's Response: Absolutely! Happy to have you on board. :)

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