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Reviewer: Basil Grape Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

hahaaaaa nice) love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Double ridges to me are actually the biggest cliche of them all. This was a wonderful compliment to T'Lara's story :)

Author's Response:

Lol and I remember a reference on here to the "green manalishi with the two-prong crown"....

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think the Bingo card is full, now LOLOL.

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Reviewer: TLara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG, you just about killed me with that crack!fic!!! Of course, I also forgot (or deliberately left it out as I have done that in a serious fic before, *cough cough*) to use the famous cliché of the fangirl-author who puts herself into the story, and you even managed to sneak us both into the plot!!!

Brilliant! And thanks for the frals, I will, erm, put them to good use, I promise!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! And re the frals--*chortle* .. you're welcome and please do!!

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

So mean poor T'Lara, you cant remember EVERY cliche, it would be unfair to other writers to hog them

LIve the variable eye colour JIm though, maybe he is like Chistmas tree lights they flash ditterent colours  deppending on setting or mood or contact lenses

Though seems to be a SCIFI meme HP in book has one colour of eye movie HP another

Author's Response:

In fact, I was happy to note two of my favorite "items" missing (well, sehlats aren't precisely K/S..)--so I got to play with them!

Reviewer: CMM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1


Author's Response:

Praise indeed! Thank you!

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