So is this completed or not? If it is not completed, it should be in the Works in Progress category.
Wow I love the Salt Creatures... and they don't like Vulcans too coppery.This is so cute how Jim gave himthe emotions tutorial. It is so hot
This is a really great ficlet. Please do a follow up with them back on board the enterprise.
I forgot to ask, where was the plot? I found the cave... LOL, but not the plot.... but it really doesn't need one. The outstanding descriptive writing stands alone.
Brilliantly written. Hot as hades, too, I might add!
Very nicely done! I like how you portrayed Spocks doubts into the meld. It was hawt!!
I'd like to know what about Uhura, though.
Thanks for sharing!