Date: 01/02/2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. This is great, what a treat for the season! You did an excellent job and I'm keeping this so I can read it over and over again. Fascinating little facts in there. I loved the way mint brought them together and love kept them in each other's arms. Beautiful.
Date: 12/31/2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awww :) This is nice. I like the beautiful melancholy of the first bit... Kirk's reverie and the deep emotions that he hides behind his 'captain awesome' facade... And Spock admitting to himself that maybe he is more human than he lets on... The idea of Amanda's mint garden becoming a tourist attraction was just brilliant! And I'm glad that Kirk and Spock found each other at the end - lovely.