Date: 11/15/2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, my. This is becoming a deeper, more serious story. I know McCoy plans to search every utility closet on the ship, so he will find them eventually, but I hope that in the meantime Spock can help Jim address his demons.
Date: 11/15/2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Among the many things to like in this story, I like the way you are handling point of view -- telling different sections from different characters' points of view and telling us clearly what the characters can see and what they can't. It may be a minor technical point, but I like it.
Date: 01/29/2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
yay! it's back. naughty you with the cliff hanger. we await discovering what McCoy sees!
Thanks my friend for checking out this very short (paragraph) it shouldn't even be called a chapter..anyways, hopefully the next 'chapter' will be much longer and will be the finale..~crosses fingers.~
Date: 01/29/2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
Update VERY SOON PLEASE!!!! I just can not wait to find out what is going to happen from him and their explanation of why and how they were both locked inside the same closet together.
I am sorry for teasing everyone with this story. I hope this is it...and the next chapter will be the finale..Thanks for the review, and hanging in there.