Date: 10/26/2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
My heart swelled intensely.
[Report This]Date: 10/20/2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was wonderful! Thank you so much for posting it. I especially loved Jim's careful directions sent via encryption to Bones. I just wish I could have been a fly on the wall in Bones office when he read it. lol. Keep writing - this is great stuff.
Date: 09/17/2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
ah! so good! but i need more!!
Date: 09/10/2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don' know if it was a purpouse but o my god I laughed so hard, for example to that "At least a weak" I could clearly see Kirks expression at the moment :D But it's perfect, just perfect.
Date: 03/14/2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice take on "Amok Time". I could feel Spock's tension. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 06/14/2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it! But it's not really NC-17. lol Or, are there going to be more chapters that take place during the eight days? :D
Date: 03/16/2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
So it would seem, lol. ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved this - it's hard to believe this is your first story ever, it's so well written. I loved how Jim interacted with Spock, took care of ship's business first and the only thing missing is a story about what happens next...
Thank you for sharing your work.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/11/2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Re: "first fan fic ever"...if this is foreplay....
Author's Response: Yes. Yes, it is... :)
Date: 03/11/2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked it...but damn it, I feel like a climbed this ginormous hill, got 3/4 of the way up and then tripped and rolled back down, lol.
Author's Response: LOL. So I'm a tease, huh?
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
It finished too soon. There must be a love scene between them both. Please there must be more.
Jules x
Author's Response: Will see what I can do. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great first story. Loved it. Perfect characterization. I love Jim giving instructions to McCoy...by mail. The title is perfect too. Great job. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
You cannot in all seriousness leave it like that. It was amaaaaaazzzzing. Please do a follow up of when they come to day 8.
Author's Response: Will see what I can do. XD
Date: 03/11/2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this, and rang true. I also hope you will write a ton or two more.
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[Report This]Date: 03/11/2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
The tension created by your build up was well crafted. Your Jim follows well the pattern CEO
Amok time. Look forward to your further writing
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