Date: 01/12/2021 7:29 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise
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Date: 06/27/2013 10:00 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise
Nicely written and very well paced! I like how Bones was a little devious in this one. :) Thank you for writing!
Date: 06/16/2012 4:28 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise
The best Spirk story I ever read, this is soo sweet, so good, I can't get enough of reading it again and again!! =D
Please continue with such excellent work!!!
Date: 04/05/2012 8:45 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise
I would say to you only this: it would help if you had a beta-reader go over this; I think it would help a LOT. it seems like a good story, but there are so very many errors of grammar, usage, etc., that it obscures what you were trying to say. frustrating cos it is a storyline I would have loved to read, if I could have made it through to the end...
Date: 04/04/2012 5:01 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise
Beautiful metaphor of the crashing, wild sea and the steadfast shore to represent the K/S dynamic!
Sneaky Vulcans are sneaky! :)
I'm proud of Bones and Uhura!