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Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think my heart stopped!

~AKO



Author's Response:

Oops...Glad you liked it my friend.

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah...thanks for that, lol.



Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it. I aim to please.

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have an idea, and I hope that you take it since I do have a degree in Journalism/Advertising...

 

ADVERTISE THE ART!!! LOL



Author's Response: Great idea girl...shall do that in the next poem...in the meantime here is another poem with an image that you may like... http://ksarchive.com/viewstory.php?sid=3090 Enjoy...want more porny pics just let me know...almost reaching 300 posts on the archives...Celebrate good times....

Reviewer: Vulcanlady Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

D' un coup j' ai très,très chaud, franchement, c' est bien rėussi!

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Jesus fucking christ! How the hell did I over look this?? And I JUST took a shower!

And your poem?? LMFAO! That is hilarious! Why doesn't this have more reviews??



Author's Response: I was hoping you`d come by a take look. Not many people like poetry, and some have no clue that there is art with the poem...and skip it....poor souls....

Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great poem. I love the expression on Jim's face in that image.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was funny
The photo was, oh so yummy
Good Job! Honey!

Author's Response: You are so sweet. That pic!!What a treat. Now I'll have to write more tout de suite.

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omg what a pic!  Where is the sketch of Jim's face from, TOS?  It looks earlier.



Author's Response: Not sure my friend....and who cares about the poetry.....damn good pic...LOL... thanks for liking..

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