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Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2016 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

sweet

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THANK YOU xx

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I guess time travel really mucks up with psionic sense. Now what would happen with a slingshot around the sun there are at least two more episodes that deserve that treatment. Though definitely an alternative universe four Pon farr periods in as many years....

Maybe a first line could be Jim seeing a pattern but can he move from Pon Farr to permanent partner. Would work with a final time travel trip to San Fransisco and Jim putting his foot down no more Pon Farr without a permanent commitment.

would love you to connect the dots. Happy to beta such an epic tale



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I think I, maybe, know what you mean....

Bethany

Reviewer: mary100859 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue I would like to see more to this story. I find it interesting that this takes place during the Guardian of Forever episoide. I would love to see how you make this work during the episoide and after when they get back. I really hope that you do contiune and that we will see and update to it soon.

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

"You had me from hello" .... love it.



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Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I agree. A very interesting story idea..I like their little talk. Great job.

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Thank you - As always, I wasn't sure there was enough story in it, compared to what some people on this site can manage!

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

O_O WOW!
Just such an interesting story idea. Amazing.

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Really? I have just read T'Dazz's First & Forever - I have NO talent next to that, or several other fics by at least 2 other authors I can think of!

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