Date: 12/09/2017 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
You say we can’t have enough pon farr fics, but I disagree. This is the only one I’ll ever need. In fact, I’m even willing to say this is the best Spock/Kirk fanfiction I have ever read. I was blushing at the edge of my seat from start to finish, hanging on your every word. I have no idea how you managed it, but you managed to write each of their very differing personalities absolutely perfectly. I’m looking forward to more of your work, but I don’t know if you can top this one.
Date: 05/12/2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
It reads as so true that the boys would be all "we can totally handle the personal/ professional conflict" before the bonding, but that it actually takes adjustment & negotiation.
Also love all the 'rents in this ( including Mother Hen Bones!!!).
All in all, well done!
Date: 04/30/2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoying this story but you might want to control-F, control-G the dashes from the last time it was formatted. There's a bunch of them left over from when this story was print-ed and ob-viously split-ting isn't needed on-line.
Author's Response: Corrected most of these. Thanks for feedback.
Date: 04/29/2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story. Spock's fears about a bonding beteen them were done in a realistic fashion without being over dramatic. Kirk's determination to get through to Spock was oh so just like Kirk. McCoy's concerns were done tastefully. He was concerned because of his position as a doctor and that was the only reason for his early objections, not because he had personal issues with the two of them bonding. All three came off so completely in character. Well done.