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Reviewer: AshayaTReldai Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sweet story... would you consider adding an MPreg warning in the story description?

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

It is still open. Please use the 'contact me' section of my bio to send me your physical email and I'll send you a word document in a couple days. :)



Author's Response:

Awesome! You've got mail ;)

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awww... So awesome! I hope Jim takes a pic of the snow family to show bones and the kid how spock told him about the baby! So cute and original! I hope you write more in this verse

Author's Response:

Thank you very much :)

 

The picture is a great idea, thanks! I don't have experience with writing long stories but I'll try :) It might take some time, I'm not a fast writer...

 

 

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awwww, it's very sweet and I liked it very much. Great job!


As an aside, however, I would suggest combing through once more to correct a few typos and some oddly worded sentences, lol. Most of these errors are in the first half of the story. ;)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind review :)

 

Oh my! And here I thought my weird writing style was getting better. Yes, I tend to make the sentences more and more complicated the more I read and try to correct them.. X)


I didn't want to bother you but if your beta offer is still open, I'd be very happy. Maybe you can spare the time and the energy to send me a corrected version to upload? Only if you like of course! Pretty please? *sends some cookies* :)

Reviewer: Mairin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was adorable, from the way Spock knew just how to get Jim outside to the snow angel to Jim's sexy thoughts transmitted through touch to the delightful and beautiful way Spock finally broke his news.

I woud love to see a sequal if you felt like it.



Author's Response:

Spock just knows how to handle his illogical human ;)

 

I'm happy you like to read more, I'll try :)

Reviewer: Arcadii Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a sweet and precious story.  I loved the way Spock finally dropped his news - a Vulcan snowbaby.  That's probably the first one ever for the universe.  I hope you're planning a sequel - I'd love to see Jim as a doting father-to-be and I wonder what kind of cravings Spock would have?  Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words :) I just love the image of Spock and snow.. reminds me on my cat. She's curious to play with it but at the same time disgusted by the cold, lol.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

You said you wanted to cool down, when you are warming up my insides!
That was just the most adorable way for Jim to find out! "Captain Sexypants" inderd. Having all those fantasies while holding on to Spock's fingers! :3
ADORABLE! :D

Author's Response:

Thank you! :) Yeah, in the end I didn't cool down, too. Bad, bad Jim XD

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