Reviews For Nothing But Numb
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Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2012 5:26 AM Title: Numb (Beta)

This is beautiful Alice...so very sad, but beautifully written...thanks so much for sharing it..

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2012 3:49 PM Title: Numb (Beta)

sagt die Liebe? XD

At risk of sounding awfully patronising, it makes SUCH a difference when you actually bother to write in proper English and present your work nicely, so well done!  You obviously have talent and a particularly strong line in angst...  This is a really sad piece - it would even be gut-wrenching if I were in the right mood!  What is especially good is some of the imagery that you use - you are obviously very imaginative.  I'm hoping for more in this vein!

By the way, you do mean 'in vain' and not 'in vein' in your bit! XD

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2012 1:16 PM Title: Numb (Beta)

He left Jim? IDIOT SPOCK! How dare he! That's horrible! ;_;

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2012 8:22 AM Title: Numb (Beta)

Wow!  Good job.  Kinda made me want to whip out the razor but I can see Jim's pov and anguish very clearly.  Great job!

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