Date: 08/19/2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was amazing!! Loved the 1st person POV as well - Kirk's voice was great. This almost felt like two stories in one - the action/adventure/crackiness of Ping and then the bonding/spirky/section on Earth. I really really enjoyed it - very unique and creative. Also - very hot sex scenes!
Date: 08/13/2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was...wow. I can't even describe it. I wanted to punch that pyschopath keeping Jim hostage and then these two idiots for taking so long.
The last chapters really screwed with me and Jim's mind but God was it good. This is freaking brilliant.
Date: 08/13/2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this a good mix of serious and amusing. I especially like the reflections of the men after Ping. I think wea underestimate how lonely being unconnected can be. There is a point at which the fleshpots lose their fascination
Date: 08/13/2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Fantastic story. Really well written and their reactions to the situation were perfectly believable. Strangely enough, even though Sneck and Padnus didn't really do anything to him, I couldn't help but feel sympathy to Spock for being forced into something like that. Loved Jim's 'how-many-times-do-I-have-to-tell-you?' no nonsense attitude in the beginning chapters.