I can't read this, because my Spanish kind of sucks, so I'll grade it upon other stuff, like...length--5K words is pretty impressive, how much I like the sound of spoken Spanish, which is a lot, and that you added yet another fic to the archive for those who love k/s but don't have a lot to read (in comparison to the stories in English) when they come to this site because english isn't their first language.

So, thank you for posting. I'm sure it's lovely.