Reviews For He Knew
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Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

Smiles joy leaping heart the start and then the finish hits you hard your heart almost stops beating. You should have known but you failed to anticipate it. Just like Jim.

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

It's hard to think of all the good things when the bad things that has happened keeping rising to the surface. Also, when Jim finally does something about his feelings for Spock, he realizes he's too late.

Again, very sad, but very well written. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I wanted it to end differently but somehow it turned out this way. You are so right, when we are alone it's usually the bad things that occupy our mind. I am currently writing the third chapter but I'm afraid it won't turn out much happier.

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