Date: 11/28/2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I haven't read the original story; I have to go back and read. I love your writings and I can take a story where major characters die and even forgiveness is withheld, so I have no problem with the ending. It's just that this story seemed a bit abrupt, especially in the ending. It seems like something was left out or there wasn't enough story. Ah well... just my thoughts. Maybe I'll feel different when I read the original.
Thank you for posting. hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. I hope you like the original version better.
Date: 11/28/2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I haven't read the original story; I have to go back and read. I love your writings and I can take a story where major characters die and even forgiveness is withheld, so I have no problem with the ending. It's just that this story seemed a bit abrupt, especially in the ending. It seems like something was left out or there wasn't enough story. Ah well... just my thoughts. Maybe I'll feel different when I read the original.
Thank you for posting. hugs
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED THIS! Wish Jim could've lived and gotten with Gary but Spock never being forgiven made up for it WELL DONE
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 11/23/2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I prefer how it went in the original story. This is too sad. And I hate that Kodos won!
Author's Response:
This version wouldn't get out of my head and some people dont like the fact that Jim forgave Spock. It is something a bit different.