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Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok, before you laugh your ass off... I didn't want to write 'which Kirk or Spock was Doping whom' but DOING whom... I don't think they'll have to take recreational drugs xD... Also I saw the outline and... What exactly does 'prehensile' cocks mean? XD never heard that before. Educate me!

 

also: Second Review just because you deserve it for this cute and hot story



Author's Response:

LOL! I got your meaning. It's so very hard to find a good synonym for a person, you know? LOL. I'll go back through later and try to fix the clarity, fix any errors, as I often do. Thank you for reviewing, twice. I very much appreciate it. lol.

 

As for prehensile, you may google it, because you really need the visual aid to fully understand it's awesomeness in terms of application to humaniod penis. lol. If you want to see it used in a fic, go to my profile and read: Prenhensile: An Alien Love Story. LOL. *shameless self-promotion*

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not sure I'll be very popular on here if I say this out loud, but I think the best porn always has an emotional component ;)

In your story it was nu!Spock's worry and inexperience and the way the others handled it, and the easy, smoldering flirtiness of the TOS Spirk couple.  



Author's Response:

Nah, I agree, and typically this always happens to me that I can't just make it about sex. Someone's always got some kind of mushy intent behind the driving of their cock into an ass, LOL. There's nothing I love more than some porn with a side dish of romance or vice versa, really. *girly sigh*

I'm glad it worked for this fic too and I'm not so disappointed about how it turned out, just that, as you clearly saw, it was not what I wanted to write when all kinds of naughty shit flew into my mind on the Sabbath day, LOL. Sunday I was all like, Woo-hoo, crazy porn time, today I'm all like...where the hell is my naughty porn juice? I'm just...flabberghasted that it turned out so very, very different that than outline, LOL.

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have that same problem sometimes. LOL. That's why I stopped trying to direct the Muse and just let the Muse direct me. So of my best fics came about because of that. And, ok, I agree that Estrogen doesn't help sometimes. Still loved this!



Author's Response:

Yes...I need to chill, lol. I had just had in my mind a picture of all the glory naughty-ness today would bring and then...schoomp. lol

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was soooooo hot! Oh my god. You are a Goddes!!

a few Times i was a Little confused as to which spock or which Kirk was Doping which ( per whom... *bdm ksch*) but you always got it back on track.

as to thoughts for a mirror Story (funny i too have been playing with the thought to Write one), i'd say: mirror Kirk seems like a pretty feral being, especially next to the kind of submissive mirror Spock. What if there was a competition (sexuall or otherwise) and Kirk is both annoyed with spock's aloofness and rejection of participating, as well as intrigued, what that vulcan had to be like, if 'unleashed'? Maybe Spock Neefs a little encouragemnt to let go of his shyness...

sooo i spent ten minutes writing this Review and can only see half of it. I'm curious what the autocorrect of my phone made of it...

Hope your Day is better now! Keep your head held high!



Author's Response:

Lol. I'm glad you liked the story. I understand about malfunctioning technology. For instance, I've already replied to you on my phone...where is it? Who the hell knows, but sure as shit didn't post here, did it? LOL! At any rate, I'm definitely considering a mirror fic version of this of some kind...we will see.

Reviewer: vixis Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

*laughing at previous comments* . I enjoyed it a lot :-). I can think of one story no one has thought of...Mirror Mirror doubles (like this story) but one twin is sub and the other dom & essentially do the sane story but with less intellient emotion and more sadistic getting rocks off sort of thing....but its just a thought...you *did* ask. Not that you need inspiration i hasten to add! More, more!!



Author's Response:

Hmmm...a whips and chains Mirror version of this story...*jots into smut logue* Very, very intriguing....

Thank you! And yes, I did ask, and I do not regret it. I"m glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking time to comment and share you ideas...

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is not something to sneer at. I loved it. All the right amounts of hotness with just a tiny bit of plot. Well done!

Author's Response:

I'm not sneering, lol. It's just not the story I had planned to write. Sometimes, the keyboard just takes on a life of it's own...or rather, the Estrogen does at any rate...LOL

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have an idea for an exceptionally naughty mirror-fic--but I'm not sharing. Does that make me a slash-tease?



Author's Response:

Lol. I'm not sure if that makes you a slash tease. I'm pretty sure you have to show some metaphorical titty in order for it to count. For instance, Jim and Spock get naked, throw each other against the nearest hull in blaze of lust and firy Pon Farr-y craze and...

 

And then you would be a slash tease, LOL

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Frankly Ms. Dizzle, I am shocked and disgusted that you could dare to sully the good name and reputation of our respectable archive with your filth.  I hope you are ashamed of yourself, writing something so vile indeed...

No seriously, this was great - no knotting, prehensile, duelling cocks, I grant you, but it didn't need them.  As weird and bizarre a concept this is, it had a strangely affecting emotional component to it as well and I think any more wanton and dirty sexuality might actually have detracted from that.  However, feel free to write another story with any of the above ;)



Author's Response:

Yes, I am so very ashamed, ashamed that I could not have sullied it further, LOL.

Funny thing is, the emotional component is exactly what this wasn't supposed to have, lol. It became an entirely different story (as you saw from my accidental outline post, lol)! I'm glad you liked it anyway and thank you for making me smile with your nice commentary. I suppose I'll have to store up my naughty ideas for another story. LOL

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Don't know.about a Mirror!fic, but I can always go for some more of your Bones/Sarek smut. Don't have near enough of that. But this? Super hot. Wow. I need a cold shower now. Thanks. LOL. Hot!! All beg and grovel for more! Because this? Hotness extreme.

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

Author's Response:

Thanks. I wanted to do something really, especially heinously naughty but I got depressed and ended up with this, lol.

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