Date: 02/04/2013 5:26 AM Title: Bad day
Oh, what I needed to make it through another week! LOVELY. Looking forward to your next story. Depth, emotion and poetry that I rarely see. You are a talented writer.
You are kind and generous, thank you.
Date: 02/04/2013 12:26 AM Title: Bad day
wow! well done. I always imagined there might be some personal fall out from this episode, and you captured it quite well. keep writing!
Yes this episode needed resolution.! And sex, obviously :)
Date: 02/03/2013 5:56 PM Title: Bad day
You are such a gifted writer, i loved it & the characterisation is A+
Thank you for a lovely review. The ability to maintain the characterisation is so important to me, these guys are the key to the whole thing.