Date: 02/08/2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! That is just so sad and so poetic/beautiful at the same time. Can't anyone see how much he is hurting?
I know Spock Prime would pick up on it in a second but which Spock is forbidding Jim from talking to him?
Date: 02/24/2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
lots of run-on sentences here. :-(
Date: 02/17/2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Jim. Valentines is depressing for single people
Date: 02/15/2013 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very sad ending but it's so real. I'd like to translate it into Chinese if that's OK with you. I'll credit you fully and post it @ www.mtslash.com (registration-required). Thank you so much! :p
Author's Response:
Yeah sure go for it.
Date: 02/13/2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
This feels so real because of the love scene between Spock and Uhura in STXII. I can totally see this is exactly what might happen in the next movie.
There must be someone for Jim, please.
Author's Response:
Not at the moment, I may come back to it at a later date. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02/12/2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
So sad. Do a sequel and he can have the Ambassador.
Author's Response:
I dunno if I will, Life is pretty depressing at the moment maybe if things pick up I might do a sequel, might.
Date: 02/12/2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I thought for a minute there jim was gonna kill himself.
Author's Response:
I did think about it but I decided against it.





Date: 02/12/2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very sad, I was so hoping a happy ending...poor Jim...Hugs Jim((())) Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Yes very sad ending, could have been worse though. Thanks for reviewing.





Date: 02/12/2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn. So depressing.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry lol.
Date: 02/12/2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Best response to the dreaded day is to shut the door and watch TMP! There are worse things though than Valentines, the nightmare of a May movie with a pregnant Uhura in for real.
Best Valentine, Nimoy and Shatner 'fess up to the games they played with the script. Wish I could find that article I read as a teen with Nimoy describing how expressions of love and pain look the same on screen............
Author's Response:
I hope she's not pregnant, she belongs with Scotty and Jim belongs with Spock. I think I might watch TMP just for the epic love although I prefer the book by Gene Roddenberry as it is so much slashier.