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Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2013 7:29 PM Title: Sometimes the Simple Solution, is the Best Solution of All

Chocolate semen would completely change the world and its power structure.

No doubt.

~AKO



Author's Response:

Yes... it would bring quite a few people to their knees, I'd imagine..... LOL

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2013 7:17 PM Title: Sometimes the Simple Solution, is the Best Solution of All

ok i'll admit i'm a freak. someone needs to do barrows and bones and throw scotty in there.



Author's Response:

Sounds like a recipe for disaster LOL.... or heaps more fun....

 

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

yeoman barrows, nice!



Author's Response:

One of the best femmes on TOS in my opinion.  They should have used her more.

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

those two ... are a hoot



Author's Response:

LOL thanks.  Deadpan indeed.

Reviewer: Bedwench Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please write a follow up, that really brightened up a pretty awful day. Thank you.



Author's Response:

LOL My RL has just exploded with work, mainstream writing and school and social stuff so I don't have time to add to this.  But, I have thrown it open to a round robin so others can have fun writing this and entertain you too.  Cheers.

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

ALL of my strange fics come from our fb group lol



Author's Response:

LOL.  Indeed, it is the source of many good things.  Hey, I have thrown this open for a round robin, in case anyone wants to join in the fun.  I had written two final chapters (1) normal, they get Spock under control, and (2) m-preg, but I was only really shutting it down due to lack of time... was wondering if anyone else would like to contribute?

What sort of trouble can Spock and Jim get into with this?  Let your imaginations run wild, peoples!

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

BAHAHAHHAAHHAAH! Omg...this is so awesomely hilarious and hot. Can't wait to find put what Bones got up to on Risa. Lol



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Blame Partricia!  It was here idea.  I have no idea what goes on in that mind of hers... well, I'm starting to get an inkling....

 

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Whole lotta roflin' goin' on!!!



Author's Response:

LOL thank you!  Glad you are liking this!

 

Reviewer: TPurr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

OMG, I can't stop laughing! The imagery is too much! I can't wait to see where this is going! Thank you for making my day! lol



Author's Response:

LOL thank you so much.... I love it when people crack up laughing at my writing, thanks you!

Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

wakes up bleary eyed with a mouth that feels like a sehlat slept in it after rolling in chocolate, vaguely remembers a game of chess then .......... crystal clarity .............. GENE SPLICING ...... "Bo?... No..!!" ............ and emits a long low vulcan moan of shame.



Author's Response:

LOL.... chocolate hangover LOL....

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh i see. Awesome. lol.

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh i see. Awesome. lol.



Author's Response:

Cheers  Thanks

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

This reminds me of a David Gerrold Seminar,  he was describing ideas for writing on the basis of the What if concept. What if, what would the effect be?. 

What if semen tasted of chocolate...............

What if Jim's semen tasted of chocolate

If it did how did that happen

What effect would it have

How would an ignorant command school trainee know about gene therapy.......

What were they doing on Risa?

Can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

LOL I must get to one of those seminars.  When is he next coming to Australia?

 

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh my God. Please let there be a threesome with McCoy. Oh man.

Author's Response:

McCoy is having the same trouble with Yeoman Barrows, what did he have done on Risa LOL?

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

CHOCOLATE SEMEN IS THE BEST THING I'VE EVER HEARD

Spock is so not the innocent Vulcan 

IT WAS ON BONES' HAND! XD 



Author's Response:

I will tell Patricia to look at the reviews because it was her idea! 

LOL thanks.

Poor Spock, can't help himself.

And poor Bones, ewl!

 

Reviewer: AKO Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

What, was there a field trip to Risa or something???

(or ... something?)

~AKO



Author's Response:

LOL Shore Leave....

 

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh yeah more sex is definitely gonna work. NOT! Lol. This just keeps gettin better. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I am so happy that everyone is enjoying this!  (Snooopy happy dance).

 

Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

"Spock pushed him back slightly, and asked, ‘Are you sure that repetitive intercourse is the route to emotional control, Jim?’"

The answer is, "HELL, YES!!"

more!! :))



Author's Response:

LOL I looked at that sentence twice in your review, and thought, did I write that?  Yep, sure, there it is right there at the end of Chapter 5.  It just looks different when plucked out of context like that LOL.

I NEED SLEEP.  Supergirl here is out of the woods, and it is 2.38 am here.  I will writ eh rest of the cave chapter tomorrow.   Thank you so much for reviewing this!

 

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Funny as Hell!



Author's Response:

LOL blame Patricia, it was her idea.  I'm just painting by numbers LOL.  thanks.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

Chocolate? I thought it was Love Potion #9, but it was That Old Black Magic (well, dark brown..).

Hilarious--and somehow fluffy? 



Author's Response:

LOL thanks, but only you could describe a fic containing the words 'his nose buried in Jim's crotch' as 'fluffy' LOLOLOL.

 

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