Date: 10/16/2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Luscious! Somehow you manage to combine mind-blowing sex with a portrayal of two mature, intelligent guys who move easily into a life-long commitment. I'll surely reas the next in the series.
Thank you very much, I am glad you liked it and very glad you took the time to leave a comment. :) this was a first attempt at writing so I am flattered people liked it!
Date: 03/04/2013 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Was this a deliberate exercise in larding up erotic purple prose with business jargon? If so, must say it's a fair success although my enjoyment was interrupted when it got too overt.
Thank you for your review, it made me reflect on my language usage. I do find some jargon amusing when used in a different context not only business jargon but any kitch expressions . I enjoy the effect caused by using language that is anachronistic for characters that were created in the 60s but who are set in a time when our current phraseology would be A archaic. Sorry if you found it distracting from the flow of the plot. I love you phrase erotic purple prose.
Date: 03/01/2013 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, gawd, this was hotter than hell and I nearly fell on the floor laughing at this line, 'Spock and Kirk exchanged glances, Kirk trying to muster a look of innocent insouciance which merely managed to manifest itself somewhere in the range best described as shifty.'
LOLOLOLOL great entertainment to wake up to, thanks!
Really glad you liked the humour, I find it impossible not to find humour from the characters even when I am having a bad day They just make me laugh.