[Report This]Date: 04/07/2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Muy buen trabajo! Siento que aceleraste un poco el paso de la historia y eso comprimio un poco todo, pero disfruté tu trabajo. Merece un capitulo mas, como que final? :-)
Gracias por compartir!
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm mediocre at Spanish but this sounds cool from what I could decipher. Though, you probably don't want this to be a Round Robin, or do you? As you have it posted now, anyone can add a chapter to your fic (that is what the bird is for). I don't know if you know it or not, but I thought I would put it out there in case you didn't realize you had selected the round robin option. It would not be the first time someone has done that by mistake, LOL. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh cielos, oh cielos oh cielos!
Pobres chicos! Me ha gustado tu desarrollo de la escena, aunque me confundí un poco al principio con los dialogos del romulano y el otro alienigena.
Publica pronto el siguiente capitulo, por favor!
Date: 03/17/2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
The Spanish to English translator tended to be a little less than desirable, but I still enjoyed your story. It seems that the boys are going to be used for sexual experiments. While Jim may like that, I do not think Spock will as well. I look forward to further chapters. Thanks for posting.