Reviews For In the Beginning
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Reviewer: Birdsthatfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2015 6:25 AM Title: None

What a wonderful story!

Reviewer: Akaiii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2015 9:34 AM Title: None

This story was simply extraordinary... Perfect storytelling and I definitely wasn't expecting this!

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2013 2:43 AM Title: None

Wow, this is awsome storytelling, so different, so powerful!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comments, angelocustode.  In the Beginning is one of my personal favorites of my K/S stories, but readers don't seem to see it the same way I do.  Therefore, I really appreciate your response. Perhaps the death in the story is just too much for readers to take, but even though I was the one writing it -- a very emotional situation! -- I always saw the little girl as the Mother, all the way through, with the associated implied immortality, for believers, anyway.  I've written one other story involving a non-human religion based on a Mother Goddess, so I obviously have some issues I was working out in that direction.  Anyway, thanks so much for the kind words. I'm very glad you found something of value in this story.

Reviewer: atymer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2013 9:16 PM Title: None

Legends of born from the travails of men.  I have always wondered how much is legend and how much is truth. This was reverent, and beautifully rendered.

Reviewer: Mickey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 12:52 AM Title: None

A fabulous tale! There are many stories involving danger from a lonely, powerful alien or artificial intelligence, seeking love or meaning (among star trek stories I think of Metamorphosis, of Who Mourns For Adonais, and of V-ger in the first movie.) But I can't think of any that present this theme with as satisfying and imaginative resolution as this one. This is a surprising and wonderful story!

Reviewer: Dale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2005 8:37 AM Title: None

A tale from a gifted storyteller. I love the way this story unfolds. Kirk & Spock helping others while coming to terms with their own immortalty -together. Seeing them through the eye of an outsider givres a great perspective. The tenderness of the characters was heartfelt and realistic. Wonderful!

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