Date: 04/03/2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a beautiful poem. Spock reflecting on the beating of Jim's heart, and what it means to him. Your words flow so well. Love this piece. Now, what I don't understand is why you put the poem under friendship, bottom Kirk, romance and kink...Just curious...
Thank you so much, I really do appreciate your kind words.
And as for the rest... now that I look at it, I can see why you are confuesed, even though those categories made perfect sense to me when I posted it. LOL 'who can explain what the heart does.'
Thank you for the lovely review.
Date: 04/03/2013 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
*can barely contain myself* That's how...uhm...overjoyed I am to have read this, beautiful, masterful work of odorous love. LOL. :) I believe you've really captured here the essence of their emotion...so much heart you've put into this...it reaks of divine fluffiness.
LOLOL such admirable restraint, I don't know how you can hold your praise in.... straight to the heart LOLOLOLOL.
The floor is yours LOL. And everyone else is thinking WTF?