Reviews For Your Human Heart
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Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

i like this :)

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2013 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice and mellow.  I like it.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is so much the essence of them.



Author's Response:

rotflmvao... sorry.  Ask Pamdizzle.

 

Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

My favorite line: "I stir in our bed, and you look up and beguile".  This was sweet, thank you.



Author's Response:

Awww thank you so much!

 

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a beautiful poem. Spock reflecting on the beating of Jim's heart, and what it means to him. Your words flow so well. Love this piece. Now, what I don't understand is why you put the poem under friendship, bottom Kirk, romance and kink...Just curious...

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I really do appreciate your kind words.

And as for the rest... now that I look at it, I can see why you are confuesed, even though those categories made perfect sense to me when I posted it.  LOL 'who can explain what the heart does.'

Thank you for the lovely review.

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Exactly, yes, and then you realize---fuck it, I did it for ME!!! LOL



Author's Response:

You know (points to review below) some people appreciate my work and don't swear at me over it!

:))))))))

 

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lovely poem.  Tender and affectionate.  I like it.



Author's Response:

Awwwwwwww thank you so much!

 

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Mine may or may not be quite as subtle...LOL. Oh dear...lol



Author's Response:

There is always that point where you think, 'what on Earth was I thinking?' Right?  LOL.

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

*can barely contain myself* That's how...uhm...overjoyed I am to have read this, beautiful, masterful work of odorous love. LOL. :) I believe you've really captured here the essence of their emotion...so much heart you've put into this...it reaks of divine fluffiness.



Author's Response:

LOLOL such admirable restraint, I don't know how you can hold your praise in.... straight to the heart LOLOLOLOL.

The floor is yours LOL.  And everyone else is thinking WTF?

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