Date: 11/27/2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really appreciate this post. Edgy and masculine it pulls together so well the idea that Vulcan has extricated Spock from him. It hits the idea Jim is tryo g to be angry with the Vilcan identity but his anger with Spock is still there.
Date: 04/07/2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow!! The title, the words, the image at the end. Brilliant. So this is what Gol has done to them both. Torn them apart...Well written my dear...
Gol haunts my nightmares. It is the epitomy of Hell for everyone it touches.
Date: 04/05/2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it's better than the original by Amichai!
An pooooooor Jim!
What a killer last line, btw.
I've had the outline of the idea to use Amichai for awhile. I was going to use it as the basis for Jim's post-Gol suicide note but I decided not to 'go there' and have now closed the book on that fic, unbirthed.