Date: 04/08/2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is a very strange little tale... have to think about it for a little bit! In the beginning I thought you are maybe talking of both spock/kirk as well as shatner/nimoy because you capitalized the 'Will', but I'm not sure if I'm just interpreting shit now XD *is in interpreting mode because has just finished reading a short story for one of her classes* x.x
in any case the poem(?) leaves me with a positive feeling... and I had to chuckle because it was so metaphorical up until the point where he flat out states 'they are in the margins on page 47' ... great XD
That's my favourite line :))
Date: 04/08/2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That's all I can say is wow. This is wonderful - both because of the perfection of Jim's voice (I could hear him) and because it just led so wonderfully through so much, and ended so beautifully - the photo with Spock at the end. I can't even pick out just one or just two 'favorite' lines - there are way too many of them. Oh, man, my heart just about stopped beating looking at Spock after hearing Jim talking to him over the years. Look at him. Oh lord, Thank you for this one - I'm adding it to favorites.