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Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is a very strange little tale... have to think about it for a little bit! In the beginning I thought you are maybe talking of both spock/kirk as well as shatner/nimoy because you capitalized the 'Will', but I'm not sure if I'm just interpreting shit now XD *is in interpreting mode because has just finished reading a short story for one of her classes* x.x

in any case the poem(?) leaves me with a positive feeling... and I had to chuckle because it was so metaphorical up until the point where he flat out states 'they are in the margins on page 47' ... great XD



Author's Response:

That's my favourite line :))

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

I had to read it twice. I'm like that, just to see if I missed anything. Absolutely stunning piece. Plus the image at the end of the story was perfect. Awesome job.

Reviewer: marianne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  That's all I can say is wow.  This is wonderful - both because of the perfection of Jim's voice (I could hear him) and because it just led so wonderfully through so much, and ended so beautifully - the photo with Spock at the end.  I can't even pick out just one or just two 'favorite' lines - there are way too many of them.  Oh, man, my heart just about stopped beating looking at Spock after hearing Jim talking to him over the years.  Look at him.  Oh lord, Thank you for this one - I'm adding it to favorites.

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

she says very quietly *very nice*  sigh

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm drunk--LOLOLOL. God..."Come to me in the Nexus" FUCK YEAH!! I loved it.

 



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The universe will find a way :)

Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

"They might as well try to tear apart
The Universe.
Good luck to them.
We will be again.
I believe that, Spock."

I believe that, too.  T'hy'la.

~AKO



Author's Response:

stereo stereo? :)

Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

"They might as well try to tear apart
The Universe.
Good luck to them.
We will be again.
I believe that, Spock."

I believe that, too.  T'hy'la.

~AKO



Author's Response:

stereo? :)

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really good. Wow.



Author's Response:

yay!

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow.



Author's Response:

wow? :))

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