Reviews For The Sun Always Rises, Do You Want It Or Not.
Reviewer: space_cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 03/12/2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good story, wish there was more to read!
Reviewer: angelocustode Signed 
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like your stressing of the wrong eye-colour and that this Jim's inner sun felt "wiser". I actually feel that Abram's Kirk has a great potential of character development besides - of course - a pair of stunning eyes.
I like this story, it's tender and positive.
Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 04/19/2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your ideas, your dialogue and pacing. but I have to suggest this needs to be beta'd. The verb tenses and sentence structure make this hard going and detract from your very good approach.