Date: 04/28/2013 4:54 PM Title: Logical Reasoning
I think it is a great start to the story and the fact that Jim already is protecting Spock and as the good doctor said he is already in love with Spock. I can not wait to see how the story progresses I think it will be interesting. Hope to see the update to your story soon.
oh thank you thats really kind i hope you enjoy the rest x
Date: 04/28/2013 4:04 PM Title: Logical Reasoning
Hiya :) You could work on your grammar a bit to improve this. Also just out of interest, did you mean to post this as a round robin? That means anyone can add a chapter.
ahh sorry about the grammar and i didnt realise about the round robin thing.
Thank you for reviewing xx