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Reviewer: Sweettea Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2016 12:28 AM Title: Logical Reasoning

yes a cute James kirk as a five year old.

Reviewer: mary100859 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2013 4:54 PM Title: Logical Reasoning

I think it is a great start to the story and the fact that Jim already is protecting Spock and as the good doctor said he is already in love with Spock. I can not wait to see how the story progresses I think it will be interesting. Hope to see the update to your story soon. 

Author's Response:

oh thank you thats really kind i hope you enjoy the rest x

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2013 4:04 PM Title: Logical Reasoning

Hiya :)  You could work on your grammar a bit to improve this.  Also just out of interest, did you mean to post this as a round robin?  That means anyone can add a chapter.



Author's Response:

ahh sorry about the grammar and i didnt realise about the round robin thing.

Thank you for reviewing xx

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