Date: 05/01/2013 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 In the Gym
I don't remember reading this one which is delicious I can enjoy it all again
Author's Response: Cool, thanks. It's about two years old, I think.... I thought I'd lost some of the chapters, but turns out they were filed in their own folder because it was getting a bit long...
Date: 05/01/2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 Talking Til Dawn
It was all going well until the last line. But it explains a lot I mean if Vulcan women are like Nyota demure but strong like Amanda would be very attractive. Just doesn't work well if you are half human. But is it loss of friendship or something else that bother Bones
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. You would probably recognize this story from a long time ago....
Date: 05/01/2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 Talking Til Dawn
I am liking the story thus far and a little bit surprised in the fact that you have me in your story that the Vulcan female it the dominant partner in a relationship um I think that makes it a bit interesting. I think the only think I have a bit of a problem with so far is that Spock is really submissive and I do hope that with Jim influencing him that he will become more dominating than he is now. Well it is your story and it is only a suggestion from me, but I do look forward to reading more. Be very inspired in your writings.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this thoughtful review. Yes, I took an interesting turn in this story with the start on that issue, and have actually written the remaining 32 chapters, I think you will love Spock later in the story then if you don't want submissive LOL.