Date: 07/10/2013 1:32 PM Title: No Win Scenario
EEEEEEEE! I was wondering where this story had gotten off to. Oh, be still my breaking heart. Sulu is an idiot at first but then they all gather round and do the letter scene (*tears*) and now Jim's off to ... lose ... at Vegas? Oh boy. This is going to be good. Sybok won't forget Jim's bravery, I know that much, but what can he do at the end? It's not like he can make him a Vulcan. I can't wait to see how this ends. You're doing a fantastic job!
Date: 06/17/2013 10:40 PM Title: We got some explaining to do...
Stonn. Oooh, that Stonn had better get it and get it good. Poor guys. I mean, you know, Uhura and Scotty and Sulu. And Chekov, since he already knew. *GASP* What will happen when Spock finds out his dearest companion already knew?? Oh noes. Bad juju. I don't like the guys fighting. I know, it's part of the movie, but that doesn't mean I have to like it. But I like your writing. Awesome job!
Date: 06/12/2013 6:36 PM Title: He's a What?
I cannot begin to tell you how much I am enjoying this story. "His eyes widened and welled up. It was dreadful." One of my many, many favorite points in the movie. You're doing great, and I'm glad Chekov knows. But how long will Jim wait? With this mysterious (and potentially evil) Vulcan glaring at him, I don't think he has much time left. You're doing so well! Keep at it!
Date: 06/07/2013 1:40 PM Title: 99 Problems and Counting.
Oooh! Danger! How exciting. And I didn't think about the danger of Jim bleeding red. Good idea! So Jim was all patched up by the time Spock got there? If he were ever going to know, it would be tonight. And wayyyyy, wayyyy too much kissing. This is going to be bad, I can tell. I can't wait for more! Super job!
Date: 06/06/2013 1:28 PM Title: Ready to Party?
Ooh! I was thrilled with this chapter! You've got the characters from the movie and the Star Trek world married perfectly and I have little trouble following what's happening. Although -- Vulcans don't sweat??? What's Jim gonna do? That's easy to spot! And Sulu practically calling him "Jim" every time he turns around isn't going to be good either! You've set him up for a great fall. I can't wait to see Spock pick up the pieces.
Date: 06/05/2013 4:27 PM Title: What? Zero points?!
I have eagerly read your story from beginning to now and I can't get enough and I can't give you enough praise! I am totally enamored of A Knight's Tale and of course I'm a Trekker so seeing them married so perfectly (and in a K/S story of all things!) my dreams have come true. Thank you so much and I can't wait for more. This is your first story??? You've come out with a bang, to say the least. You're doing terrific!