Date: 06/20/2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 2 The temptation of Spock
"I can ensure that woeful sexual ignorance will not be a problem for you in the future. " laughed out loud and am now trembling in embarassed terror *stabs next*
Oh, Cowgirl, I am so delighted to hear I made you laugh out loud, I love it when something makes me laugh like thDeltas long as it did not get you into trouble.
Date: 06/18/2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 All a shore, who are going a shore.
This is wonderful! ...although, really considering it, I would find it pretty scary to meet a person-light of someone I know... 8-O
I guess the shore leave planet is a tricky place. :)
Date: 06/18/2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 Do you take this Vulcan?
LOLOLOL!! This was *great*! Hot, sytimental, funny--you had great range, darling! :) <3 A few typos here and there, fuck me if I can remember where I saw them. lol
Thank you PamEdison glad you liked, I find Spock's voice so hard to write compared to Jim, but a challenge is good.
Date: 06/17/2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 Do you take this Vulcan?
Nice first time story. I liked the idea that the Shore Leave planet could read Spock's hidden desires and materialize them for him. Sometimes our beloved Spock can be a bit dense about emotions so it is good to have his heart shown to him. Nicely done.
Thank you painted Bird, I think the shore leave planet could provide me with further fun in the future!
Date: 06/17/2013 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 Do you take this Vulcan?
This was near perfect, I enjoyed it very much and loved the idea that Spock`s subconcious gave him the "bridal suite" and Jim. I also loved that Jim heard his mental call and came and that they got bonded on Vulcan.
There were a few typos and grammatical errors but they did not distract very much from the story (I only mention them because you said you wanted to improve), for instance it is "taut abs" not "taught abs".
However, it was a truly delightful story and I hope to read more from you.
Thank you for your encouraging words. I am truly glad you enjoyed the story. My Beta is not able to proof read for me at present so the comments on the typos are great. I will correct them later.
Date: 06/17/2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 Do you take this Vulcan?
What a beautiful ending to this story. It gave me very warm feelings...Just what I needed....Thank you...
Oh I am so glad you liked itAir was a bit worried that this story did not gel and that the end was a bit flat. So thank you for your feedback, you have made me laugh. :)
Date: 06/17/2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 All a shore, who are going a shore.
I loved your first chapter...I could hear Jim(Shatner) speak the words you've written for him, even the laughter. You have such a rich vocabulary my friend, and not to mention a descriptive imagination. Love it so far...Off to the next chapter..
Thank you my friend. I always find Jim so easy to write so this was a challenge to myself to try Spock's voice. No sure it is quite right but I will try again at some point.
Date: 06/16/2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 All a shore, who are going a shore.
I really like this story. It's very different from all the ones I've read. I like how Spock's mind controls this space and how this is his way of realizing that he loves Kirk and wants to share a life with him. And your writing style's awesome.
Thank you very much. It was very hard for me to write this totally from Spock's pov so I was not sure I had the tone right.
Date: 06/16/2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 4 Do you take this Vulcan?
"Out of hand"...*snort*
It was delightfully complex and completely enthralling, just as I knew it could be!
Oh thank you so much, it did go off on a journey of its own!