Date: 02/21/2012 8:20 PM Title: Blowing Smoke
This is one of the lamest stories that I have ever had to suffer through reading. Your writing style is atrocious. By the end of reading this cliched piece of crap I wanted to remove my eyes with a melon spoon. I highly suggest that you don't quit your day job. I also recommend that before you 'critique' someone else's work you take a very close look at your own work.
Date: 12/24/2005 3:17 PM Title: Blowing Smoke
I know *exactly* how Spock feels, being a migraineur and allergic to side smoke.